How I wish!

Copyright: Kelly Sands

As I look at the dark clouds in the sky, I feel the pain in
my heart. Life didn’t move on as you said it would. All those beautiful
memories that we made together come to my mind. Why did it have to end that
way? As I think more about you, tears well up in my eyes. I cannot cry as I
cannot let anyone know about it. The clouds bring rain and the rain washes the
earth and brings life into it. How I wish I could just cry and wash away that
pain and start life anew!
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers and day 12 of The Ultimate Blog Challenge

30 Comments Add yours

  1. I hope you can move on. Sometimes crying really does help me!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yeah crying does help! Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂

  2. A says:

    I wish she would just put it all behind and move on! Expressed it so beautifully, Reema!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Hope she will 🙂 Thank you Aathira 🙂

  3. Anonymous says:

    I hope Reem, that this is fiction. The beauty of clouds is that no matter how dark they are, they move on. HUGS <3

    1. reemwrites says:

      This is fiction 🙂 Hmmm yeah that indeed is the beauty of clouds 🙂

  4. Its easier said than done.
    To let go is tough, to convince yourself to move on is even tougher.
    Well written.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Lancelot 🙂

  5. Such familiar feelings!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂

  6. BR Prakash says:

    Excellent Expression Reema.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  7. Dear Reem,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Would that tears actually washed away pain.

    Nice one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    1. reemwrites says:

      Glad to be part of Friday Fictioneers. Thanks 🙂

  8. Unfortunately, I know this feel all too well. I have a penchant for falling for the wrong guy, which is why I no longer play the game. I hope you find solace.
    My piece is here.
    http://dothedead.wordpress.com/2014/07/12/nuclear-holocaust-2179-the-looming-spectre/

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thanks for reading. I will read your piece soon.

  9. Anonymous says:

    Dear Reema, Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! We're glad you're here! I love your story and I hope you can wash away the sadness with tears some day. A beautiful, touching story! Nan 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Welcome to my blog 🙂 I am glad you loved the story 🙂 Thank you 🙂

  10. Hmmm this one was deeply expressed. Loved the idea with which you expressed the theme 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Saurabh 🙂

  11. It was very well expressed in those few words, Reema 🙂 I guess crying and letting everything out can be a good therapy at times

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yeah Soumyaa. It helps at times. Thank you 🙂

  12. Alicia says:

    Even though tears don't make "things" better they often make the person feel a tad bit better – release of tension and all that.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yeah that is so true! Thanks for reading 🙂

  13. Sun says:

    i felt your character's pain and perhaps the clouds will soon dissipate and a new sunny life will begin. well told story.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  14. P.S. Joshi says:

    Reema, My comment seems to have disappeared. It went somewhat as follows: Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! Sad but well-written story. Crying does help, but then we have to try and put sad things in the past and move on even though it's hard. Well done. : ) —Susan

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you! 🙂 And I am sorry that I didn't receive it earlier.

  15. Uma says:

    Crying does help to ease out the pain in the heart..nicely expressed, Reema!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

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