How I wish!

Copyright: Kelly Sands

As I look at the dark clouds in the sky, I feel the pain in
my heart. Life didn’t move on as you said it would. All those beautiful
memories that we made together come to my mind. Why did it have to end that
way? As I think more about you, tears well up in my eyes. I cannot cry as I
cannot let anyone know about it. The clouds bring rain and the rain washes the
earth and brings life into it. How I wish I could just cry and wash away that
pain and start life anew!
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers and day 12 of The Ultimate Blog Challenge

30 responses to “How I wish!”

  1. I hope you can move on. Sometimes crying really does help me!

  2. A says:

    I wish she would just put it all behind and move on! Expressed it so beautifully, Reema!

  3. Anonymous says:

    I hope Reem, that this is fiction. The beauty of clouds is that no matter how dark they are, they move on. HUGS <3

  4. Its easier said than done.
    To let go is tough, to convince yourself to move on is even tougher.
    Well written.

  5. Such familiar feelings!

  6. BR Prakash says:

    Excellent Expression Reema.

  7. Dear Reem,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Would that tears actually washed away pain.

    Nice one.



  8. Unfortunately, I know this feel all too well. I have a penchant for falling for the wrong guy, which is why I no longer play the game. I hope you find solace.
    My piece is here.

  9. Anonymous says:

    Dear Reema, Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! We're glad you're here! I love your story and I hope you can wash away the sadness with tears some day. A beautiful, touching story! Nan 🙂

  10. Hmmm this one was deeply expressed. Loved the idea with which you expressed the theme 🙂

  11. It was very well expressed in those few words, Reema 🙂 I guess crying and letting everything out can be a good therapy at times

  12. Alicia says:

    Even though tears don't make "things" better they often make the person feel a tad bit better – release of tension and all that.

  13. Sun says:

    i felt your character's pain and perhaps the clouds will soon dissipate and a new sunny life will begin. well told story.

  14. P.S. Joshi says:

    Reema, My comment seems to have disappeared. It went somewhat as follows: Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! Sad but well-written story. Crying does help, but then we have to try and put sad things in the past and move on even though it's hard. Well done. : ) —Susan

  15. Uma says:

    Crying does help to ease out the pain in the heart..nicely expressed, Reema!

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