How I wish!
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| Copyright: Kelly Sands |
As I look at the dark clouds in the sky, I feel the pain in
my heart. Life didn’t move on as you said it would. All those beautiful
memories that we made together come to my mind. Why did it have to end that
way? As I think more about you, tears well up in my eyes. I cannot cry as I
cannot let anyone know about it. The clouds bring rain and the rain washes the
earth and brings life into it. How I wish I could just cry and wash away that
pain and start life anew!
my heart. Life didn’t move on as you said it would. All those beautiful
memories that we made together come to my mind. Why did it have to end that
way? As I think more about you, tears well up in my eyes. I cannot cry as I
cannot let anyone know about it. The clouds bring rain and the rain washes the
earth and brings life into it. How I wish I could just cry and wash away that
pain and start life anew!
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers and day 12 of The Ultimate Blog Challenge.
I hope you can move on. Sometimes crying really does help me!
Yeah crying does help! Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
I wish she would just put it all behind and move on! Expressed it so beautifully, Reema!
Hope she will 🙂 Thank you Aathira 🙂
I hope Reem, that this is fiction. The beauty of clouds is that no matter how dark they are, they move on. HUGS <3
This is fiction 🙂 Hmmm yeah that indeed is the beauty of clouds 🙂
Its easier said than done.
To let go is tough, to convince yourself to move on is even tougher.
Well written.
Thank you Lancelot 🙂
Such familiar feelings!
Thanks for reading and commenting 🙂
Excellent Expression Reema.
Thank you 🙂
Dear Reem,
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Would that tears actually washed away pain.
Nice one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Glad to be part of Friday Fictioneers. Thanks 🙂
Unfortunately, I know this feel all too well. I have a penchant for falling for the wrong guy, which is why I no longer play the game. I hope you find solace.
My piece is here.
http://dothedead.wordpress.com/2014/07/12/nuclear-holocaust-2179-the-looming-spectre/
Thanks for reading. I will read your piece soon.
Dear Reema, Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! We're glad you're here! I love your story and I hope you can wash away the sadness with tears some day. A beautiful, touching story! Nan 🙂
Welcome to my blog 🙂 I am glad you loved the story 🙂 Thank you 🙂
Hmmm this one was deeply expressed. Loved the idea with which you expressed the theme 🙂
Thank you Saurabh 🙂
It was very well expressed in those few words, Reema 🙂 I guess crying and letting everything out can be a good therapy at times
Yeah Soumyaa. It helps at times. Thank you 🙂
Even though tears don't make "things" better they often make the person feel a tad bit better – release of tension and all that.
Yeah that is so true! Thanks for reading 🙂
i felt your character's pain and perhaps the clouds will soon dissipate and a new sunny life will begin. well told story.
Thank you 🙂
Reema, My comment seems to have disappeared. It went somewhat as follows: Welcome to Friday Fictioneers! Sad but well-written story. Crying does help, but then we have to try and put sad things in the past and move on even though it's hard. Well done. : ) —Susan
Thank you! 🙂 And I am sorry that I didn't receive it earlier.
Crying does help to ease out the pain in the heart..nicely expressed, Reema!
Thank you 🙂