Dusk till dawn

dusk till dawn

I walk towards the lake as the sky breaks into colours of dusk. I stand mesmerized yet again. Memories of you come rushing to my mind – of the day we met, the day you knelt down with the ring. We’d spent so many nights here, watching the lovely skies from dusk till dawn. Though I was scared of darkness, your presence gave me courage.
But then you left. Suddenly.
I still come here to see you in the twinkling stars, to feel you in the first rays of the rising sun for this is all I have of you.
Writing this post for the above picture prompt for Friday Fictioneers on Rochelle’s blog.
PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
Prompt for today is : Put your iPOd on shuffle/turn on the radio to your favourite station – write a post using the song as your prompt.
The song that came up was “Dusk till Dawn” and hence the post.

16 responses to “Dusk till dawn”

  1. Josly says:

    Nice post! Surprisingly this song is in top of my playlist this week.

  2. nuttynupur says:

    Lovely snapshot of a feeling

  3. adodani says:

    Beautiful conclusion 🙂

  4. Shilpa Gupte says:

    Beautiful picture, and words, too! The poignancy at the end …why does life have to have sad endings?

  5. A very poignant piece and interesting take on the prompt.

  6. Dear Reema,

    It sounds like he came to a tragic end. Lovely ending lines.



  7. Parul Thakur says:

    Oh no! That’s a sad one 🙁 loved how you penned this in such few words and the right emotions.

  8. Sunrises says:

    loved it. especially these lines ” to feel you in the first rays of the rising sun”.

  9. Ramya says:

    Very apt for the photo prompt. It’s difficult to forget loved ones even when they leave this world.

  10. Rashmi says:

    Oh the yearning! Love the song, and very apt post indeed, for the song. Lovely 🙂

  11. granonine says:

    Sad, but she at least enjoys her memories of their good times. Wonderful take on the prompt.

  12. Norma says:

    Oh such a sad story.

  13. James says:

    Did he just leave or did he come to a bad end? Foul play perhaps?

  14. Obsessivemom says:

    That’s sad. Sometimes all we have is memories to live on.

  15. Vinitha says:

    Such a poignant tale! Life can be cruel at times. How beautifully have you woven the words to portray the emotions, Reema. Loved it.

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