Spooky, house

We kept walking along the isolated parts of the shore and an ancient house welcomed us. It looked spooky and I just wanted to return. But Tom wouldn’t agree.
The house though old looked strong. There was a cabinet which had a lot of strange stuff. While Tom was still busy inspecting the items, I turned around and saw a man.
“Finally you are back!”, he said.
“Who are you?”, I asked.
“Who are you talking to?”, Tom asked.
“That man there”
Finding no one there, he said, “You’re watching too much TV!”
“Who is he?”, asked the strange man!
This post is written for the above picture prompt at Friday Fictioneers.
Picture Prompt by: Claire Fuller
Also linking to the Daily Post’s prompt:Ancient

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20 responses to “Who?”

  1. My gosh…this one sent shivers down my spine

  2. I kept reading again and again to find who he is,, Who is He?
    You really come up with interesting microblogs Reema!
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  3. Shailaja V says:

    Ah, the dual ghost scene. Perfectly encapsulates her conflict and the underlying fear. Maybe she’s the ghost!

  4. Vinitha says:

    That was creepy! Good one, Reema.

  5. Debbie D. says:

    That was spooky. 🙂 Nicely done and perfect for the prompt.

  6. nabanita says:

    Ahh that was brilliant. I would want to know what happens next!

  7. Woaaahh! Spooky!

    The image sure reeks of it 🙂

  8. Brian D'souza says:

    Mini horror tale…nicely put!!

  9. Iain Kelly says:

    Spooky ghost story, nice take on the prompt, well done.

  10. Spooky …… Goosebumps on me …..

  11. Ooh that sent shivers done my spine!

  12. Lizy says:

    Definitely spooky – I hope the ghost is benign!

  13. deepagandhi says:

    Woah! that was spooky like a mini horror story..Good one Reema 🙂

  14. So many possibilities in this story. Great take on the prompt.

  15. gahlearner says:

    Great story, I love it. It seems she is wandering between two worlds.

  16. Woah! That was something. Very well narrated and executed.

  17. Dale says:

    So who’s real and who is not? Nice take on the prompt.

  18. Dahlia says:

    I wonder whom she will go home with! Very intriguing story.

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