The new territory
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Copyright: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields |
Ever since she was a child, she had always dreamed of making
it big in life. Though she came from a not so well off family, she wanted to
achieve what nobody else from her tiny village ever did. The many hurdles that
came on her way didn’t bog down her determination even a bit. Her hard work had
paid off and she was on her way to a new country for her higher studies. As the
flight was about to land, she looked at the city through the window and said to
herself, “ A new territory to conquer!”
it big in life. Though she came from a not so well off family, she wanted to
achieve what nobody else from her tiny village ever did. The many hurdles that
came on her way didn’t bog down her determination even a bit. Her hard work had
paid off and she was on her way to a new country for her higher studies. As the
flight was about to land, she looked at the city through the window and said to
herself, “ A new territory to conquer!”
Word Count: 100
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers Prompt for 1st August,2014 and Day 31 of The Ultimate Blog Challenge.
She is the champion then. 🙂 Hard word really proves fruitful. Nice fiction in just 100 words!
Thank you 🙂
Very concise! i look forward to reading more like this.
Thank you 🙂 And I assure you that more such stories will come up here 🙂
You are getting better everyday Mich. 🙂
Well written.
🙂
Thank you Lance 🙂
Champion of the world, ready to chase her dreams. Love ur stories, Reema. They are so full of aspirations:)
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Thank you Vishal 🙂
Fantastic extract!
I love your blog title- have you heard of 'Joey Essex' ? 😛
Thank you Sophie 🙂 I haven't heard of that. I'll google it 😛
Oh my – I wonder where touch down is located. If in France – pop over and say hello and come have dinner with us 🙂
Awww.. that is sweet of you! I don't where my character is headed to. But I will convey your message to her 😀 Thanks 🙂
More power to her 🙂 Inspiring post, Reema!
Thank you Aathira 🙂
HOW AWESOME…I want to conquer another territory now 😀
Wow Red! Come on give it a try! I know you will do it 🙂
Dear Reema,
New beginnings. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle 🙂
Thoughtful and optimistic and dreamy and beautiful post Reema 🙂
Thank you Anmol 🙂
Reema, It looks like she has the self-confidence she needs to succeed. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
Thank you Susan 🙂
Reema, It looks like she has the self-confidence she needs to succeed. Well written. 🙂 —Susan
Cool ! I wish her success in her new territory 🙂
Yeah Afshan 🙂 Thanks for reading 🙂
You have me rooting for her in less than a 100 words. 🙂
Thank you Zeba 🙂