The fighting wish upon a star

“I am not going to talk to you again as you always fight with me”, she said as they looked away from each other and stood there in the balcony lost in their own thoughts. This was their usual routine- talk about something, then fight and then stand without looking at each others faces. Suddenly they saw a shooting star and both of them closed their eyes and made a wish. According to their pre-decided agreement they would communicate with each other through writing when fighting and so they wrote down what they had wished for and exchanged the papers. And there was an instant smile on their faces as both the papers read, “I wish to be with you till my last breath for I love you so much sweetheart”.

This post is written for Lillie McFerrin Writes- Five Sentence Fiction- Wishes .

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12 responses to “The fighting wish upon a star”

  1. Ramya P says:

    Cute story you got there Reema! 🙂

  2. Aww…this was so sweet! I hope their wishes do get fulfilled 🙂

  3. This is sooo sweet Reema. I smiled along with them when I read their wishes 🙂

  4. this is just too lovely ma'am 🙂 wow 🙂

  5. Afshan Shaik says:

    felt all the mush 🙂 good one

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