It is urgent

time urgent

“Can you meet me now? It is urgent.”
“But what is the matter? Are you okay?”
“Just meet me now, will you?”
He rushed to meet her. “Something is wrong”, he thought. “Was she sick? What had happened? Wait, does she want to break up with me?”, he wondered. She was there waiting for him and he ran to her.
“What is the matter?”
“There was something that I wanted to say”
He feared the worst and then she knelt down on one knee.
“Will you marry me?”
“Only if you stand up and let me do my job lady!”
Word count : 100
This post is written in Daily Post’s prompt:Urgent
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16 Comments Add yours

  1. Wow!! Role reversal at its best!!

  2. Shantala says:

    I enjoyed this. Nicely done. 🙂

  3. Mayuri says:

    Cheeky! And why not? Loved it!

  4. I loved the man’s dialogue and the woman’s style.Awesome .You are really superb with short stories

  5. Brian D'souza says:

    Adrenaline moments to both…. beautiful

  6. Tina Basu says:

    awww… so cute!! I like when the girl takes charge! But i didn’t in my case!

  7. Nice one Reema! Good to see the way the two characters behaved

  8. Aha! Damn good fun. What a terrific use of 100 words prompt. Sweet, happy and effective.

  9. Manisha Garg says:

    so many emotions in 100 words nice

  10. deepagandhi says:

    Short and sweet story and apt with the prompt 🙂

  11. ʞɐ says:

    Wow, nicely done. 🙂

  12. Rajlakshmi says:

    Hahaha i loved that dialogue in the end. Sweet story

  13. Shalzzz says:

    Aww.. that’s too sweet. The last line? Nailed it! <3

  14. Loved the happy ending. Wonderful take.

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