Almost caught!

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Tara peeped into her daughter’s room and was glad to see her studying for the next day’s exam. 
Meera was so engrossed reading the novel that she hadn’t noticed her mom at the door. She was scared for a moment. But the textbook was finally useful. It had saved her from being caught red handed.
 
This is my first attempt to write 55 fiction. Fiction in exactly 55 words. 
This post is written for Day 4 of of BaR-A-Thon.
The theme for Day 4 is “Caught Red Handed”
 

29 Comments Add yours

  1. haha…been there and done that!!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Well, this wasn't entirely fiction you see 😉

  2. I think you pulled it off well – your first 55-word fiction. Nice

  3. Carol Graham says:

    Great fir your first 55-word post

  4. Shilpa Gupte says:

    Haha! Didn't we all do it during our childhood!

  5. Whether it's your experience, Reema ??? Just for fun …. 😛

  6. Yeah…I remember doing that too!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yes, same here 😀

  7. Ira says:

    Good start!! 🙂

  8. HA ha ha…we all have done that being Kids.Some caught, some not 🙂

  9. Rajlakshmi says:

    hahaha that sounds so like me 😀

    1. reemwrites says:

      Then you and I are pals! 😀

  10. Kala Ravi says:

    Haven't we all been there! Hahaha…done brilliantly in 55!

  11. Shilpa Garg says:

    Hahaha! This is something that we all have done it as kids 😀

  12. DeeDee says:

    havent we all done this atleast once in life?
    Nice read

  13. Yay! Learnt a new trick to keep reading books via the Kindle now 😀
    I never hid story books while studying. Too much of a nerd I am, no? 😛

    1. reemwrites says:

      Really? You never did that? Hehehe.. I hope you are doing great with the kindle trick 😛

  14. Aditi says:

    That's me! 😉
    Great first 55er!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Hahaha, so many of us can relate to this right?
      Thank you Aditi 🙂

  15. 55 🙂
    Did it right !! 🙂

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