Can I confess?
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There are things that I’ve always wanted to share,
But I stop myself because I think that there is none to care.
Can I confess that I sometimes wish I had someone who
listened to all that I had to say?
listened to all that I had to say?
I tell you that I am old enough to take care of myself,
I tell you that I am a grown up now and I don’t need any
help.
help.
But can I confess Ma that your care is all that I crave for
now that I stay away from you?
now that I stay away from you?
I go on putting a smile on my face,
I try to enjoy life and make each day the best of my days.
But can I confess that there are times when all I do is
cry?
cry?
I give my best in whatever I do,
No matter if the things are old or new.
But can I confess that in search of perfection I am scared to make mistakes?
In life’s many trials I have tried to be strong,
Trying not to be put down by the things going wrong.
But can I confess that there are times when I’ve lost hope
and I’ve just wanted to give up?
and I’ve just wanted to give up?
I decide to move on and walk ahead,
I promise myself that no tear I will shed.
But can I confess that I often look back at the memories and think if I could go back in time and change everything?
This post is written for Blog Chatter‘s prompt for the week- Can I confess?
Echoes the mind of every person away from his/her family. Wish we could be like birds, nurtered till we learn to fly….then forget and lead our own lives. Lovely Reema 🙂
Thank you Kala 🙂
I think a lot of us can relate to this.
Beautifully penned. 🙂
Thank you Ak 🙂
You have expressed complex emotions in simple words and rhyme :).
Well done !
Thank you Prateek 🙂
Second everyone's thoughts here. Beautifully expressed… We all have felt that way at some point in our lives.
Yes we all feel this way at times!
Very pertinent questions to ask…expressions at their best!
Thank you 🙂
The thoughts expressed here are not just yours but everyone's. All of us go through this and can I say regularly?
Yes! We all go through these things in life.
Why is that your confessions resonate with mine, Reema! Beautifully penned! 🙂
Thank you Vinitha 🙂
How beautifully you've captured these emotions that all of us feel from time to time
Thank you! 🙂
I can confess you have asked questions that surround all our minds..
Richa
Yes! We all have these questions in our minds.
Wonderfully written and perfectly said!! Keep writing more 🙂
Thank you 🙂
it's not easy to let down your guard and look vulnerable. but i guess when you're with loved ones you can afford to let out all your inner weaknesses.
do drop by mine.
Cheers,
CRD
Thanks for the comment 🙂
it's not easy to let down your guard and look vulnerable. but i guess when you're with loved ones you can afford to let out all your inner weaknesses.
do drop by mine.
Cheers,
CRD