Trust me, I can and I will!
I was sure that it would be difficult for her to find success in what she wanted to do and she was giving up her job for her it. I couldn’t see her broken if she failed and it hurt me that she wouldn’t listen to me and so I said, “Don’t do it”, as I made my last attempt to stop her.
“Didn’t you say that you’d always be there to catch me when I am falling? I trust you and I also trust myself and so let me walk and see if I fall before you make an attempt to catch me”, she said.
Today as I stand beside her, happy for her success, I am glad she trusted herself and didn’t listen to me that day!
This post is written for Lillie McFerrin Writes-Five Sentence Fiction-Trust.
good one reema ^_^ even i wrote for same prompt 😀
http://jrnywithprabhu.blogspot.com/2014/12/trust.html
Thank you Sachin 🙂 Yeah sure I will read it 🙂
Wow… so much of feelings in such a small paragraph.. Liked it Mish… Good going..
Thank you Lance 🙂
Good one, Reema.
Thank you 🙂
Nice "little" story :). Not short, but little :).
Strangely, in 5 sentences, you described both trust and mistrust !
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So well expressed…
A story of glory and happiness 🙂
Thank you 🙂
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This is very nicely written short story. Keep it up!
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