Comments on: Someday!

By: reemwrites

reemwrites — Fri, 25 Jul 2014 13:32:32 +0000

In reply to Ridx. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)

By: Ridx

Ridx — Fri, 25 Jul 2014 13:11:52 +0000

Beautiful and even more beautiful if you have someone to listen to this and whom you can dedicate to. Just stumbled across your blog and following you. X

By: reemwrites

reemwrites — Fri, 25 Jul 2014 01:17:30 +0000

In reply to Lancelot Quadras. Thank you Lance :)

By: Lancelot Quadras

Lancelot Quadras — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 17:49:31 +0000

Now that's a good poem Michelle.
All the while your poem i read,
there was one song which was constantly playing on my mind.
Adele - Make you feel my love.

By: reemwrites

reemwrites — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 09:07:19 +0000

In reply to Nitin Goyal. Thanks for reading and thanks for adding a few more lines :-D

By: Nitin Goyal

Nitin Goyal — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 09:01:36 +0000

someday when you feel perish, call me and i will make u cherish..
someday when its all gloom, i will come to u to make u bloom,
someday when you feel choked, i will make you to unchoke..

i knw i knw bad rhymes... :p :p

By: reemwrites

reemwrites — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 08:48:23 +0000

In reply to Me-er. Thank you Arpitha :)

By: reemwrites

reemwrites — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 08:48:05 +0000

In reply to Ramya P. Thank you Ramya :) And you may be wrong :-P

By: Me-er

Me-er — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 08:03:00 +0000

This was such a lovely poem reema.. 🙂 loved the last 2 lines…

By: Ramya P

Ramya P — Thu, 24 Jul 2014 06:15:43 +0000

Awesome poem! I kinda know who is the speaker and whom it is addressed to.. 😛 😉