Who?

Spooky, house

We kept walking along the isolated parts of the shore and an ancient house welcomed us. It looked spooky and I just wanted to return. But Tom wouldn’t agree.
The house though old looked strong. There was a cabinet which had a lot of strange stuff. While Tom was still busy inspecting the items, I turned around and saw a man.
“Finally you are back!”, he said.
“Who are you?”, I asked.
“Who are you talking to?”, Tom asked.
“That man there”
Finding no one there, he said, “You’re watching too much TV!”
“Who is he?”, asked the strange man!
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This post is written for the above picture prompt at Friday Fictioneers.
Picture Prompt by: Claire Fuller
Also linking to the Daily Post’s prompt:Ancient

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20 Comments Add yours

  1. My gosh…this one sent shivers down my spine

  2. I kept reading again and again to find who he is,, Who is He?
    You really come up with interesting microblogs Reema!
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  3. Shailaja V says:

    Ah, the dual ghost scene. Perfectly encapsulates her conflict and the underlying fear. Maybe she’s the ghost!

  4. Vinitha says:

    That was creepy! Good one, Reema.

  5. Debbie D. says:

    That was spooky. πŸ™‚ Nicely done and perfect for the prompt.

  6. nabanita says:

    Ahh that was brilliant. I would want to know what happens next!

  7. Woaaahh! Spooky!

    The image sure reeks of it πŸ™‚

  8. Brian D'souza says:

    Mini horror tale…nicely put!!

  9. Iain Kelly says:

    Spooky ghost story, nice take on the prompt, well done.

  10. Spooky …… Goosebumps on me …..

  11. Ooh that sent shivers done my spine!

  12. Lizy says:

    Definitely spooky – I hope the ghost is benign!

  13. deepagandhi says:

    Woah! that was spooky like a mini horror story..Good one Reema πŸ™‚

  14. So many possibilities in this story. Great take on the prompt.

  15. gahlearner says:

    Great story, I love it. It seems she is wandering between two worlds.

  16. Woah! That was something. Very well narrated and executed.

  17. Dale says:

    So who’s real and who is not? Nice take on the prompt.

  18. Dahlia says:

    I wonder whom she will go home with! Very intriguing story.

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