The beauty of the rain

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I stand by window looking,
And I feel the wind blowing.

It starts as a gentle breeze,
But then becomes so fierce that I freeze.

Dark clouds gather in the sky,
The birds now towards their nests fly.

I see the flash of lightening and hear,
The thunder roar as though the end is near.

I smell the petrichor as the first drops fall,
The gusts of wind almost breaking the trees that stand tall.

It begins with a pitter patter and becomes a downpour,
Its so dark that it is hard to believe that it is just four.

I keep gazing as the drops fall from the sky,
Filling the land that was once parched dry.

Everything is washed clean by the rains,
From the lofty hills, to the valleys and plains.

The beauty that this is mesmerizes me,
I could stand there for hours and just see!

This poem is a group of couplets. A couplet is a couple of lines that rhyme. Simple right? What are you waiting for? Go ahead and write your own!

Participating in Half Marathon Blogging Challenge with Blogchatter. This post is written for Day 2.
Each day as a part of this challenge, I will attempt to write different type of poetry.
Also writing this post for Day 7 of Write Tribe‘s Festival of Words #5. 

22 Comments Add yours

  1. Deepa says:

    Lovely..Agree "couplet" is easier than other form of poetry.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

  2. Unknown says:

    Lovely poem! You brought monsoon alive just with the power of your words. Very nice!

    Cheers!
    Modern Gypsy

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Shinjini!

  3. C. TdeF says:

    Pluviophile–(n) a lover of the rain; someone who finds joy and peace during rainy days.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yes, such a beautiful word!

  4. Esha says:

    Lovely form given to thoughts on rain! Really brought out vividly here!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Esha πŸ™‚

  5. A beautiful poem. Call it coincidence, I weaved a poem on winter and rains today, though not as good as yours!

    https://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2016/07/16/winter-mist/

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Vishal! I'm going to check yours and I bet that it will be better than mine.

  6. Kala Ravi says:

    Love the rains and loved the beautiful form you have given it Reema! Rhimzhim gire saawan….

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Kala πŸ™‚

  7. Lovely poem, a pluviophile by heart. The beauty of rain reflects in your poem πŸ™‚

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Darshana πŸ™‚

  8. Beauty of the rain beautifully captured….:)

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

  9. G. says:

    That second couplet. It's beautiful.

    "It starts as a gentle breeze,
    But then becomes so fierce that I freeze."

    Sach me hota hai, aise! πŸ˜€

    1. reemwrites says:

      Haan, experience se likha hai πŸ˜›

  10. Jayanthy says:

    Beautifully framed couplet, Reema! With our season slowly turning towards monsoon, this is a much enjoyable one! Lovely word to learn here too. Pluviophile at heart! πŸ™‚

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Jayanthy!

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