Heart versus mind

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I was confused,
To follow my dreams or others.
The heart was against the mind.
Though difficult, I’d to choose,
The heart always won against the mind.
This poem is a Tanka. It is a Japanese poem of five lines, the first and third composed of five syllables and the other seven.(5-7-5-7-7)
Participating in Half Marathon Blogging Challenge with Blogchatter. This post is written for Day 11.  

7 Comments Add yours

  1. Everyday I come here to see what is the new poetry form for today.Well done!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you šŸ™‚

  2. katz says:

    What lovely lines. Aren't we all a wonderful curious creatures under the sun. A heart with a mind of its own and a mind which follows it's heart.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yes we are! Thank you šŸ™‚

  3. Deepa says:

    Another good one !

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you šŸ™‚

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