Trust me, I can and I will!

I was sure that it would be difficult for her to find success in what she wanted to do and she was giving up her job for her it. I couldn’t see her broken if she failed and it hurt me that she wouldn’t listen to me and so I said, “Don’t do it”, as I made my last attempt to stop her.
“Didn’t you say that you’d always be there to catch me when I am falling? I trust you and I also trust myself and so let me walk and see if I fall before you make an attempt to catch me”, she said.
Today as I stand beside her, happy for her success, I am glad she trusted herself and didn’t listen to me that day!
This post is written for Lillie McFerrin Writes-Five Sentence Fiction-Trust.

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14 Comments Add yours

  1. good one reema ^_^ even i wrote for same prompt πŸ˜€

    http://jrnywithprabhu.blogspot.com/2014/12/trust.html

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Sachin πŸ™‚ Yeah sure I will read it πŸ™‚

  2. Wow… so much of feelings in such a small paragraph.. Liked it Mish… Good going..

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Lance πŸ™‚

  3. Prateek says:

    Nice "little" story :). Not short, but little :).
    Strangely, in 5 sentences, you described both trust and mistrust !

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Prateek πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked my little story πŸ™‚ And yeah welcome to my blog πŸ™‚

  4. Locomente says:

    So well expressed…
    A story of glory and happiness πŸ™‚

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    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Ruma πŸ™‚

  6. This is very nicely written short story. Keep it up!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚ Welcome to my blog πŸ™‚ Keep visiting πŸ™‚

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