The new territory

Copyright: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

 Ever since she was a child, she had always dreamed of making
it big in life. Though she came from a not so well off family, she wanted to
achieve what nobody else from her tiny village ever did. The many hurdles that
came on her way didn’t bog down her determination even a bit. Her hard work had
paid off and she was on her way to a new country for her higher studies. As the
flight was about to land, she looked at the city through the window and said to
herself, “ A new territory to conquer!”
Word Count: 100

27 responses to “The new territory”

  1. umangawasthi says:

    She is the champion then. 🙂 Hard word really proves fruitful. Nice fiction in just 100 words!

  2. Very concise! i look forward to reading more like this.

  3. You are getting better everyday Mich. 🙂
    Well written.
    🙂

  4. Champion of the world, ready to chase her dreams. Love ur stories, Reema. They are so full of aspirations:)
    http://vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com/2014/07/an-orkut-love-story-chapter-31.html

  5. Sophie Bowns says:

    Fantastic extract!
    I love your blog title- have you heard of 'Joey Essex' ? 😛

  6. Oh my – I wonder where touch down is located. If in France – pop over and say hello and come have dinner with us 🙂

  7. A says:

    More power to her 🙂 Inspiring post, Reema!

  8. Red Handed says:

    HOW AWESOME…I want to conquer another territory now 😀

  9. Dear Reema,

    New beginnings. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  10. Anmol Rawat says:

    Thoughtful and optimistic and dreamy and beautiful post Reema 🙂

  11. P.S. Joshi says:

    Reema, It looks like she has the self-confidence she needs to succeed. Well written. 🙂 —Susan

  12. P.S. Joshi says:

    Reema, It looks like she has the self-confidence she needs to succeed. Well written. 🙂 —Susan

  13. Afshan Shaik says:

    Cool ! I wish her success in her new territory 🙂

  14. Zeba says:

    You have me rooting for her in less than a 100 words. 🙂

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