The new territory

Copyright: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

 Ever since she was a child, she had always dreamed of making
it big in life. Though she came from a not so well off family, she wanted to
achieve what nobody else from her tiny village ever did. The many hurdles that
came on her way didn’t bog down her determination even a bit. Her hard work had
paid off and she was on her way to a new country for her higher studies. As the
flight was about to land, she looked at the city through the window and said to
herself, “ A new territory to conquer!”
Word Count: 100

27 Comments Add yours

  1. umangawasthi says:

    She is the champion then. 🙂 Hard word really proves fruitful. Nice fiction in just 100 words!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  2. Very concise! i look forward to reading more like this.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂 And I assure you that more such stories will come up here 🙂

  3. You are getting better everyday Mich. 🙂
    Well written.
    🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Lance 🙂

  4. Champion of the world, ready to chase her dreams. Love ur stories, Reema. They are so full of aspirations:)
    http://vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com/2014/07/an-orkut-love-story-chapter-31.html

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Vishal 🙂

  5. Sophie Bowns says:

    Fantastic extract!
    I love your blog title- have you heard of 'Joey Essex' ? 😛

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Sophie 🙂 I haven't heard of that. I'll google it 😛

  6. Oh my – I wonder where touch down is located. If in France – pop over and say hello and come have dinner with us 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Awww.. that is sweet of you! I don't where my character is headed to. But I will convey your message to her 😀 Thanks 🙂

  7. A says:

    More power to her 🙂 Inspiring post, Reema!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Aathira 🙂

  8. Red Handed says:

    HOW AWESOME…I want to conquer another territory now 😀

    1. reemwrites says:

      Wow Red! Come on give it a try! I know you will do it 🙂

  9. Dear Reema,

    New beginnings. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Rochelle 🙂

  10. Anmol Rawat says:

    Thoughtful and optimistic and dreamy and beautiful post Reema 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Anmol 🙂

  11. P.S. Joshi says:

    Reema, It looks like she has the self-confidence she needs to succeed. Well written. 🙂 —Susan

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Susan 🙂

  12. P.S. Joshi says:

    Reema, It looks like she has the self-confidence she needs to succeed. Well written. 🙂 —Susan

  13. Afshan Shaik says:

    Cool ! I wish her success in her new territory 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yeah Afshan 🙂 Thanks for reading 🙂

  14. Zeba says:

    You have me rooting for her in less than a 100 words. 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Zeba 🙂

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