I love you too!

Though he was a little shy and wouldn’t talk to her much, she liked him from the first time she met him in college. Soon they became good friends and he used to be there whenever she needed him. She was falling in love with him but was unsure of his feelings. As days passed by she lost all hope of him loving her until one day when she found a note in between the pages of the book he had gifted her. She recognized his handwriting instantly and realized he knew as she blushed when she read the “I love you too!” at the end of the note.

This post is written for Lillie McFerrin Writes-Five Sentence Fiction-Pages and day 11 of The Ultimate Blog Challenge.

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56 Comments Add yours

  1. sweet story Reema 🙂 good one 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Swathi 🙂

  2. Daneshwari says:

    Cute 🙂
    Good read Reema 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Danu 🙂

  3. Love can also be complex sometimes 🙂 Interesting.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  4. Viyoma says:

    Very cute love story…how i wish, she had found the note earlier…

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yeah she should have found it earlier 😀 Thank you 🙂

  5. Ritika T says:

    That is so cute Reema 😀

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Ritika 🙂 Welcome to my blog 🙂

  6. Red Handed says:

    ah sweet pure innocence. Makes me feel like a teenager.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Teenage indeed was awesome 😀

  7. Soumya says:

    Very cute! 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Soumya 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  8. McNeil PINTO says:

    Love has no bounds
    Highly complicated

    1. reemwrites says:

      Hmmm yeah McNeil. That's true.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Anmol 🙂

  9. So sweet! This was a real sweet puppy love story 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  10. This is so sweet! 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Aayesha 🙂

  11. Yes…such a sweet story.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  12. Ankur Anand says:

    an innocent and sweet story !

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Ankur 🙂

  13. What a joyful gift to find tucked away on a day when you need it most!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yes! Life us beautiful when we get these little gifts. 🙂 Thanks for reading 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  14. Anita says:

    Wow! He knew & great he shared his feelings too!
    Sweet, Reema 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  15. A says:

    Cute one, Reema 🙂 Glad that they finally expressed love for each other! It's better to be late than never 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Aathira 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you Saurabh 🙂

  16. Sushree Dash says:

    Lovey dovey…story 🙂 Brought a smile on my face 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      I'm glad you liked it Sushree 🙂 Thanks 🙂

  17. A very cute one and love reciprocated.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  18. Oh, this is so very sweet. I love it.

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  19. love turns a new leaf
    nice story… Randy

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  20. Tina Basu says:

    awww… how romantic.. a new story about to start

    1. reemwrites says:

      Yes indeed! Thank you Tina 🙂

  21. Anupat G says:

    This is really very cute! 🙂

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  22. U have potrayed the beauty of the story very wisely.5 sentese wonder!!!loved it

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

  23. Roshni says:

    how sweet! Visiting your blog via the Writers' Lounge!

    1. reemwrites says:

      Thank you 🙂

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